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What are they saying...? by Chocolatechilla What are they saying...? by Chocolatechilla
1 out of 3 commissions for Kenzu on FA, based on a fanfiction he's making.

Thank you very much!

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:iconiridescentdragoness:
This is, all in all, a very nice piece. The concept is original and the actual art was well done.

The pose is great, but has minor flaws. The pony/zebra(?)'s swishing tail was well done and it really does look like (s)he's leaning her/his shoulder on the door but his/her head is held at an awkward angle to it. It's turned too far to the viewer's left and would intersect the door. At the creature's chest, as well, it's hard to tell where the leg stops and the belly begins.

The general effect of this comes clearly across as worried, and the facial expression is excellently subtle. My little nitpicks with this are that the general color scheme seems a little bright (the gold, in particular) for the atmosphere you seem to be trying to convey and the light source on the jacket seems a bit ambiguous. The shine comes from the left, the right, the top, whereas in the rest of the picture it comes from the center.

These problems are all very little, and it is a great drawing overall. :)
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:iconmerkleythedrunken:
"Snooping as usual I see!"
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:iconkarkovice1:
Zecora, didn't your parents teach you that it was not polite to eavesdrop? :P
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DragonHeartLuver Jan 16, 2013  Student Artist
Just know i DO love all of your art but............ i miss FDD... and your other art mostly your dark ones...... you've drawn so many ponies lately..... ((sorry i can't stand MLP lol ))
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Silvolf Jan 16, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Oooh I wonder what's behind the door!
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Chocolatechilla Jan 19, 2013   General Artist
People talking :B
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:iconshockwavex2:
Excellent shading work.
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Chocolatechilla Jan 19, 2013   General Artist
Thank you!
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You're very welcome. :)
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:iconjuharvey9:
Can we get a link to the fanfic, maybe?
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Chocolatechilla Jan 17, 2013   General Artist
Oh, someone beat me to it :B
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