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Lost by Chocolatechilla Lost by Chocolatechilla
Will I ever find a way out?

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:D :D :D i like the way you've drawn the animals but it could have done with more shading and the lizard should be a darker shade of green, the trees are pretty cool and scary but in order for it be better make them a slighlt darker but there could have been more of them, the background is awesome but there could have been a small path also make it a night time, if i was to rate this 1-10 it would be 8.5 but i do like it. It's really cool i do like it :D :D :D
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Hello.
I like creepy and happy trees.

Overall, this is good.
With the smooth lines and neat shading.
But I am going to agree with what people have mentioned, it would be nice if it had a darker shade.
Especially at the trees' 'eyes' and 'mouth' so that the red eyes really do glare and glow.
Perhaps the outer ring of the whole image would be best dark and gradually becomes light when it approaches the character.
Something like: [link]

Colour choice isn't so bad here but based on the dark tints of green in the background, the overall picture would be better slightly pale.
Like in night time.
Unless this is night time, then the colour of the trees should be less saturated.

What would be cool to see is that there were more stuff in the background, even if they're just silhouettes of trees.
Or spiderwebs. Or fogs that appear to have shapes of something that suggests fear.
Yes, that, and make it blurred at some parts.

I hope I make sense.
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13Kurai Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
I really, really like your pictures (they were the background of my mobile very often :D), but I like them even more when you draw them with pencils ^^" It's like... more personal, more living.

Sorry for the critique, but I had to tell you that ^^"
(And sorry for my bad english, so I can't explain it better)
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DasSovietCanuck Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, how wonderfully creepy - welcome to the jungle ;)
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Roxalew Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Hehe, maybe ask one of those trees? they look friendly :meow:

awesome job <3
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Chocolatechilla Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012   General Artist
Lol, maybe? :dummy:

Thank you!
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Roxalew Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
bvdjbhjdfbjhfd your dead super welcome <3
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
I wouldn't dare to be in that situation D:
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DracoArtemis Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What I feel like in a minecraft forrest :X
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Chocolatechilla Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   General Artist
Haha, same.
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DracoArtemis Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD:
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Silked-Guardian Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist
digan lo ke digan.... me fascinó!!
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